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I really like this! I read a lot of good stories on Substack, and I've got to tell you that this one really feels like the beginning of a novel. The pacing, the setup, and the characters are all well done, and the premise is intriguing! I'll definitely want to read more!

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Fantastic world building! I am hooked! I LOVE the creepy bell!!

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